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I wanted to rate this one higher but the book just didnt live uo to expectations. wanted to rate this one higher but the book just didnt live uo to expectations.

1st) The description does not match up to the exact order of contents. It mentions the getting sick and the Alpha (ML) breaking into the MCs apartment, yes, but it also mentions the unexpected hear right after. While the heat did happen and it was unexpected their was a break in between. The description made it seem like it was back to back and that's what I was hoping for/excited about. On top of that you'd assume that it would take a little longer for the blindfold to come off when really it only took until the end of the MCs illness and a few days after.

2nd) The contradictions. Hopefully I'll remember it all and be able to list them but I'll start with the main ones first. 1: when the stalker is made known to us the mc goes to a Cafe to hide his hacking and cover all IP address bases. He states that he's trying to figure out who the stalker is and when when he finds them we also figure out who the stalker is as well. Let me preface, we find out at the SAME time as the MC. Not after he does BUT later in the book he admits to having already vetted the alpha stalker and basically ignoring it (a year or so in advance). 2: this is similar to him and the stalker. The patron (alpha, ML) is introduced to us as a mystery and the MC admits to not knowing who he is or having ever seen his face BUT later in the book at the same time he admits to having known who the stalker was before the book starts he also admits to having known who the ML was all along. To have done a background check on him, had seen his scars, knew his name etc. which makes no sense.

During the time the blindfold was in play the MC tells us he wants to know what the ML looks like, that he doesn't know his name etc. but then later admits to already knowing it. Make that make sense. There was no point in the blindfold to begin with. 3: him claiming camming to prove he is independent, confident etc. and that he loves his job and everything that comes with it YET he complains constantly about the men who watch him and how he struggles with money. Had he just gotten a job hed have the money he needs for bills and never would have dealt with a stalker. On top of that he says he loves his job and it makes him feel independent and confident yet he doesn't like the way he's treated by the patrons (being cat called, the sensually requests they make etc.). If he really liked it then we wouldn't have to constantly hear him mention it.

3rd) The random bursts of confidence. His attitude change killed whats left of the book for me. One minute he's stating he wants independence and the next he's agreeing to whatever 'his alpha' wants.

4th) His stupidity. Going back to the first two points, he knows all of this information and is a good hacker that can track down rapist, abusers etc. and helps put them behind bars yet he can't seem to find ONE GUY. As if he can't hack into cameras to trace the guys footsteps. Unless he went underground the stalker IS findable. He seems to care less and less about himself. Despite claiming how good he is and how he's saved so many others it looks like he draws the line at his own safety and leaves it up to two other people to do the job for him.

5th) The incompetence of the two alphas (Saint, his friend and Sebastian his alpha). You're telling be you're a millionaire who hired security that can't even stop deliveries from going to the MCs door? You can't use all of that money and all of your connections to get the cops (who'd actually care -- or at least enough to get some bribe money) to take the case and work on it actively??? and Saint its hard to take you serious. You pop up stating you know what your doing and you'll find the guy but seemed to go silence uo until the makes another move when you then learn about AFTER the fact. It makes it hard to believe that you helped save other omegas from predators. All you are is mad and doubting the entire book but yet you don't want to look at yourself??? You could have offered to stay with your friend or let him stay with you so that he has 24 hours protection but you didn't and then you get mad at him for relying on someone who actually stayed with him when he needed it.

I have more points I'm not going to even begin to think about but these are the main ones. Goodluck to those who read it. Only the incompetent people who like brain numbing idiotic books can finish this and rate it high.

P.S: The sex was horrible and not at all sexy or arousing. I skipped over it all.